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My addiction for you grows stronger
with ever passing moment.
It grows stronger then my need to stay drunk
on cheap red wine, or to taste paris on my lips again
I crave your kiss, your touch, your smile,
like a begger craves hope.
I hope and dream for you everynight
(Asif that will do any good)
I wish on shooting stars that give their long lived life
for my vain attemp to make you love me.
(There are only so many stars)
I've wished for you for so long
that the sky is now black
the moon is alone
He weeps
I weep with him...
©2004-2009 ~CandyCoveredRazors
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I wrote this after having my first taste of heart break it was bitter...It's not one of my favorites but people that have read it love it.

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:iconscarlet-torrent:
very morose and Plathesqued. I enjoy your style, it is a narrative that is visually stimulating. Of course being a fan of Poe and Plath myself, I am also swayed by the rythmic sequences of Robert Frost, and e.e. cummings. You have vivid words, that work well, if you added more of a colloquial feeling I'm sure you wouldn't need the more extravagent words. I like, I wish to read more...as soon as I figure how to fav you, I will
:iconfysosrohar:
i like it :thumbsup:

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This has been a rAnDoM cOmMeNt brought to you by Octy and Sheepers, saving the young children of the world from themselves...
:icontakingbacksunday412:
Go Megan!!1

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"Remember more than you like to forget" Taking Back Suday
:iconfrankienexus:
u caught the feelings and the moment really well, its dark but not dead because of it, i get no hint of self pity even tho its sad which is a mark of good descriptive subtle poetry.. likes

write more!

frankie
complicated girl

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I love your comments and your textures
:iconalmostempty:
Meg, you know I have always absolutly loved this poem. Ever since you wrote it...wow we've been through a lot..lol
:iconcandycoveredrazors:
Thank you very much..Yes I agree the rythmic sequences of Robert Frost and e.e. cummings is beautiful..

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April 5, 2004
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